Charging Daggertail sketch - 1/1/13

I think the pose is well done, and the motion is very well composed. However, it dose look like it needs to be cleaned up a bit. There are some smudges of pencil around his body. (To clean up a pencil drawing, you need a small eraser.) I understand that we work with what we have, but if you have a pen, or a ink tool, I'd go over your lines. Pencil is a nice tool for sketching because it can easily be erased, however pencil can also be very messy. Which I am sure you know.

Another aspect, is the shading. These lines are very nicely put, and the perspective is incredible, although, it lacks shading.

Overall, this pencil drawing is very nicely brought together. the perspective is very realistic, and the action is very well shown. It's a very nice sketch, and it's always a pleasure to see what you come up with.